
The sun melted into the horizon with a blending of colors that matched the blending of night and day. Darkness on the edge. Blinding light in the center. Eventually the dark would swallow the light and night would engulf the sky and the world below.
The creatures waited just below the surface. They couldn’t see that the sun was setting but they could feel the temperature of the soil began to drop. They knew it was almost time to erupt from their dens and go in search of food. Anticipatory drool dripped from the corners of their mouths.
As the last trace of light vanished, they rose from their hiding spots and spread across the land. Most humans had grown wise to their hunting habits, but there were still plenty of foolish and feeble ones who lack the foresight to keep them at bay each night.
They feasted well and the darkness was filled with the screams from their victims.
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I know the darkness in the story is bit of a disconnect from the beauty and light of the picture. And while I didn’t necessarily do that on purpose, while I was studying the image and looking for inspiration I noticed that the angle of the shot seemed to come from the ground (up through the tall grass). While thinking about what could have that view I decided it needed to be something evil under ground that was eagerly awaiting the sunset. And, there you go.
This picture came from moi’s new series of Once More With Feeling prompts. While I didn’t stick to the guidelines of the prompt, I don’t think he’ll mind since he said it was okay to approach it the same as his old Picture Writing Prompts if we chose to do so. As this week is going to be all about fiction for me, that’s exactly what I chose to do.
How about you? What do you see when you look at this picture? Check out the new guidelines. Or just go with a bit of fiction. But, either way, write it, link it, post it, and play along.
I just read the challenge guidelines. I do like the overall idea, I might need to look at this one as I try to expand my writing horizons LOL.
I like the direction your story took; Good point about the angle and the point of view.
Glad you liked it. I, of course, would love to see what you come up with too!
I’m not wise to they’re hunting habits so I should probably never leave the house again.
You might want to keep your doors locked and windows closed too.
Indeed.
This was awesome, and fantastic, and dark, and I loved it.
😀 Thanks!
Are these the monsters that lived under my bed?
Probably.
The lived in my hallway and crept out with the shadows each night.
Just had to double check on the critters to see that they’re alright. May you sleep well this night, friend.
Assuming the Little Prince sleeps well, then I will too.
Good luck then
Thank you.
Chills – I got chills and I could hear the screams! I am a big fan of evilness and horror so I like what you did with this photo prompt.
Thanks! Happy to provide some chills. 😉
I’m pretty sure this is how I’m gonna be taken out… thanks for the chills. Do you always write these things in response to prompts in isolation, or do you ever continue them?
I’ve continued some. One of the responses I did last year I ended up continuing on 3 or 4 times… and then decided to turn it into my NaNoWriMo project. It’s currently sitting at 60,000 words and probably needs another 20K to wrap it up. One of these days I’ll finish it off. Especially since I’ve promised it to half of wordpress once I’m done.
One half plus one now.
One half plus one… I think I can manage that. 😉
The title made me think of mosquitoes!!! Itchy itch.
Hahaha, mosquitos. Awesome. I hadn’t even thought of those little bloodsuckers… but, yeah, those could deifnitley be the creatures.
Scary stuff *shiver*
Thanks. I think. 😉
lol, yeah a compliment.
loved this!
Thanks! 🙂
Was this about every girl who ever dumped me?
I’m finally over losing the book contest. No harm shall come to you.
*phew* Glad to hear it.
While it wasn’t intentionally about every girl who ever dumped you, I can see how it could have appeared that way.
Where you saw darkness & evil rising from the ground, I see hope & a new beginning with the new day as the sun rises over the ocean.
It’s amazing how one picture can inspire so many different perspectives, stories, tales, insights.
If I looked at that picture every day for a month I could probably find a new way to approach and write something completely different.
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