John was a true talent, but he lacked the same identifying characteristics of those of his special trade. He didn’t argue. He didn’t question authority. He didn’t question everything. Additionally, he lacked the crystal clear blue eyes and pitch black hair that marked most elite magicians. It wasn’t until much later that the School of Sorcery at Santros realized they had a very large crack in their screening process. They fretted about it. They worried over it. They pondered how many others like John they had missed.
By then, however, it was too late.
John had honed his magic on his own, without the assistance and guiding hand of the school, and had delved into areas of sorcery that had been banned for time out of mind. No one left living knew how to combat the sorcery he was capable of. No one left living was even aware that the dark magic John was capable of existed. By the time he had finished dismantling the School of Sorcery at Santros brick by brick, there weren’t too many magicians left living at all.
His fury was palpable. His knowledge and sorcery were untouchable. His revenge was complete.
Or, rather, it would be complete once he had built a new school on top of the ashes of the old one. His school would welcome all who were interested. At his school, all forms of magic would be taught and revered.
Word Count: 238
This is my response to this week’s Trifecta Writing Challenge:
1a : a loud roll or peal <a crack of thunder>
b : a sudden sharp noise <the crack of rifle fire>
2: a sharp witty remark : quip
3a : a narrow break : fissure <a crack in the ice>
b : a narrow opening <leave the door open a crack><cracks between floorboards> —used figuratively in phrases like fall through the cracks to describe one that has been improperly or inadvertently ignored or left out <a player who fell through the cracks in the college draft> <children slipping through the cracks of available youth services>
4a : a weakness or flaw caused by decay, age, or deficiency :unsoundness
b : a broken tone of the voice
c : crackpot
5: moment, instant <the crack of dawn>
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